day 1.....you are brought into this world
week 1.....you are loved so deep
month 1.....you learn new things
year one....you take your first leap
your first leap is when you start to crawl
discovering whatever is between the walls,
of your house you start to learn
you start to hear when your mother calls
about a month later you start to walk
you learn to adapt to what your parents do
but you are not so sure and still naive
whatever they say you dont have a clue
three years have passed since you first walked
you now already learnt how to talk abit
you say small words that are not so coherant
but you talk all you want and as you see fit
now you are 13 and you are going through puberty
you start to infatuate and feel
love is still of course
something new to you
you are 15 now and you lust after someone
you have this crush that you think it is just
you wanna get closer and closer to her
but still to have self control you must
you are 16 now and it is a critical year
you stop doing immature and stupid things
but you start dating this girl, fortunately for you,
she is the girl of your dreams.
you are 24 and 8 years have passed,
things start getting serious and time moves fast
you slowly have a stable job
you work really hard before you start to rust
you are 30 now and are getting married
shockingly, you do not get cold feet
but you shiver under love and excitement
and you know you can never retreat
on the night of you wedding, you consumnate your marriage
you make love because it is love you feel for each other
the next day you are greater than ever before
you look at her like she is the one you will always long for forever
you are 57 now at the edge of retirement
you think to yourself if you spent your life well
but you realise with your wife that you life had been swell
now you are on your deathbed at the age of 99 which is a rare age people live up to
tomorrow is your birthday , the day you will hit 100
but can you pull through or will you die at 99?
you start to think of something, it was your first day you remembered
you thought for it for a long time now
the strenght to live for 1 more day is strong
you know you can do it
you would not want to be proved wrong
it is a bout 11.59 pm and you think to yourself
i have always loved my wife in sickness and in health
you said to your wife to be with her was so worth it
and you died peacefully when the clock hit 12
Like, omg... Did i mention Jared is good at writing poetry? He has all these ideas... omg... This poem is the sweetest thing ever... I nearly started crying... If there's sad music in the background, I'd definitely be crying. heh... Commitment is very serious thing...
Then again, I think it's too straightforward o.o Like, using words that are too direct... hmm... It could be shortened, to be made more vague, and then to add that touch to it that makes it: WOW.
